The
Dinosaur Lords
By
Victor Milan
The
Dinosaur Lords is a great example of what you call a high concept
novel. High concept basically means an idea that you can easily
communicate in a few or even a single sentence. In the case of The
Dinosaur Lords, that single sentence is “Knights fighting on
dinosaurs.” Which, I'm going to be blunt here guys, is an awesome
concept. I mean who doesn't like the idea of riding a multi-ton
monster into battle? I've loved dinosaurs since I was kid and by
that I mean like a lot of kids I was utterly besotted with them.
Having grown up... Despite having acquired many more loves and
tastes, I still love the damn things. Dinosaurs are awesome.
There's no debating that. I'll gleefully sit down and watch a
documentary on dinosaurs, or read a book on them or have a completely
over the top debate over whether or not the Tyrannosaurs Rex was a
predator or a scavenger (he was a predator obviously, although I'm
sure the Tyrant King also stole any kill he could get to). So when I
grabbed the novel, I was sure no matter what happened I wouldn't be
bored.
The
Dinosaur Lords was written by veteran writer Victor Milan, who was
born in Tulsa, Oklahoma (my own home state) in 1954. Mr. Milan has
literally been writing longer then I've been alive and has written
and published over a 100 novels and short stories. He has written
Forgotten Realms books, Mech Warrior books, cyberpunk, fantasy,
science fiction so on and so forth. His most famous book was perhaps
the Cybernetic Samurai, a cyberpunk novel released in 1985. I went
ahead and looked into the Cybernetic Samurai which was an award
winning book and might be appearing in this review series someday (if
nothing else I would like to expose some of my readers, a number of
whom are of tender years to the kind of fiction written in the 1980s.
Especially the cyberpunk). But! We're not here to talk about
Cyberpunk, we're here to talk about what, I at least think, is a
fantasy novel.
The
Dinosaur Lords takes place on the planet of Paradise, which our good
author goes out of his way to tell us is not in any way, shape, or
form Earth. On Paradise there are a small number of mammals.
Horses, dogs, ferrets, cats and most importantly Humans, the rest of
the wildlife is straight from the Mesozoic Era, that's right not just
dinosaurs but all the creatures that shared the planet with them from
the flying pterodactyls to the great monsters of the deep. Paradise
teems with them and they all live here without respect for silly
things like if they actually lived together on earth. Stegosaurus
roams the land alongside the Tyrannosaur Rex (fun fact kid, there is
actually less time separating us from the T-Rex then there is
separating the Tyrant King from the Stegosaurus) for example. These
facts among other things leads me to think that there is something of
the artificial about Paradise (there's a sentence you could parse
several ways). That said I got to give Mr. Milan points for depicting
at least some of the dinosaurs has having feathers and vibrant
colors. Something even Jurassic World skimped on. Another point is
given to Mr. Milan for having most Dinosaur knights riding war
hadrosaurs, because riding a multi-ton carnivore is dangerous and
expensive. That said there are characters who ride Allosaurus and
(of course) T-Rexes but it's a privilege reserved for wealthy high
nobles who have the land and money to feed and maintain such
monsters. Frankly I'm not turning my nose up at the hadrosaur as a
war mount either. I mean sure it's a herbivore but so are horses and
the average war hadrosaur is over 3 tons! If that wasn't enough
Milan exercised his right as a fantasy Arthur to kick it up notch by
giving hadrosaurs the ability to attack using special cries that can
burst blood vessels and cause intense physical damage as if they were
giant monstrous banshees. Now granted I'm pretty sure the real
hadrosaurs likely couldn't do that, but I don't care. As long as a
story is internally consistent I'm willing to accept some flubbing on
the biology and abilities of an extinct species brought back to life
specifically so I can ride it into battle and hit other people with
sharp bits of metal.
Dinosaur
Lords has 3 and a half separate story lines that run through it, 2
and a half of those story lines weave around each other while one
stands completely on it's own. In one story line, bard and dinosaur
master Rob Korrigan follows fallen lord Karyl Bogomirskiy, once the
most feared military leader around but now fallen on hard times, on a
job to raise an army to defense a province of pacifists. I'm going
to take a moment to say I've always felt that strict pacifism (a
refusal to engage in violence even in self defense) makes no damn
sense. My life experience has taught me the hard way that there are
people who will take nonresistance as an excuse to indulge their
worst impulses and refusing to fight doesn't make the world better.
It only gives those people free reign to be brutal monsters. That
said there are times and places where refusing to engage in violence
is the right idea. We've seen that demonstrated in history that
people engaged in nonviolent protest and action can do what all the
armies in the world can't but a blanket refusal towards violence is
frankly madness in my view. Especially when there are armies
specifically coming in to murder, rape and enslave people while
specifically saying they're doing so because they know you won't
fight them. I mean you live in a world where there are nobles who
train raptor packs to hunt men for sport, how does nonviolence sound
like a good idea here!?! Lucky for Karyl, he's able to find
volunteers. Now he's just to figure out how he's going to beat
armies full of men who trained their entire lives to kill people and
their dinosaurs with small bands of peasants and townsmen who only
realized that the pointy end of a spear is dangerous 3 weeks ago.
Karyl is an easy character to respect but hard to like, we spend most
of his story line inside Rob's head who is easy to like but at times
hard to respect. That said Rob is a charming, earthy fellow so it's
not like I disliked him as a view point character.
Our
second story line follows the Imperial Champion Jaume, who is a
pretty amazing guy. He's a knight who founded his own knightly order
and the kind of guy who can stand up to a T-Rex without quailing.
He's a poet who loves beauty and a honorable man who loves truth.
However he's got a problem, see the Emperor of the Empire is pretty
much a figure head and always has been (it's a kind of Holy Roman
Empire situation they got going on here) but the current Emperor has
decided to change that. Part of his solution is to send Jaume off to
support the people attacking said province of pacifist. Course
that's an issue when Jaume's own religious beliefs are more in line
with theirs then with the Emperor's. Jaume agrees to lead the army
because that's his duty which I understand it's his behavior on the
campaign I don't get! Let me warn everyone that spoilers are
following. Jaume's army is also suppose to attack and subdue a
number of semi-rebellious nobles who have been playing bandits. His
army is made up of his knightly order, imperial troops and a number
of feudal levies led by nobles who have fallen into a religious sect
which... Well encourages them to treat peasants like shit. When
Jaume wins the battle against the rebels (no thanks to the nobles in
his army) he arranges a truce and everyone seems happy but when those
same nobles use a false flag of parley to break into the castle and
town of the rebels and proceed to murder and rape everyone they can
and Jaume is woken up in the middle of night with this news... He
refuses to do anything, because... He's worried about the effect on
the army or the empire. This flabbergasted me so much I went and
checked with some medieval historians I knew just to see if I was
missing anything. I wasn't. This makes no damn sense! If Jaume
doesn't act, then no one will ever bother making a truce or surrender
to him ever again because he's either a liar who can't be trusted or
a weak man who can't control his troops. This kind of behavior means
that frankly Jaume doesn't have an army, he has an armed mob that
walks in the same direction he does and that's worse than having no
troops at all! I may be spoiled by my experience in a 21st
century military but this is not shit that William the Conqueror
would have stood for and he lived over 900 years ago!
Next
we have Imperial Princess Melodia who utterly frustrates me even more
then Jaume. Why? Because her story line is she watches other people
and talks about it with her ladies in waiting. She is in the
imperial court and I think it's suppose to give me a sense of of the
intrigue and plotting going on but Melodia is so removed from all of
it I don't really get any good information. So I get a story line
that involves talking about other people and watching other people do
stuff and her being in a snit with Jaume (who is her lover) because
she thinks this war is a bad idea to. She complains, sneers and
pouts and frankly I don't really care for her and I'm asking what was
the point of having her as a view point character? She doesn't do
anything! Her entire story line is... You know what I'll come back
to this. Lastly is Count Falk who is mostly interwoven with Princess
Melodia, a former rebel who swears loyalty to the Emperor and bullied
by his servant and mother plots and schemes to gain control of the
Emperor's advisory council... Well he mostly carries out his
servant's plots and schemes and then gets drunk and talks about how
terrible Melodia is for flirting with him and not fucking him (she
doesn't really flirt with him, she dances with him once and tells him
she doesn't like him). Falk almost feels like an internet “nice
guy” transported into a fantasy novel. Which is reason enough to
loathe him (2 tips from my life guys, 1 if you have to tell people
you're a nice guy... Then you're not a nice guy. 2 if the only
reason you're nice to a girl is so she'll sleep with you? You're not
a nice guy and she shouldn't sleep with you. I get the frustration,
I do! I've been told no way more then I like as well but for fuck's
sake guys get a grip! Okay back to the review) but there's even more
reason to hate Falk. He's a bloody whiner! Everything is about how
awful everyone is to him and how nothing goes his way and everything
sucks... You want to slap him in the mouth and scream “You're in
the top 1% of your society and you ride a T-Rex to war! Grow Up!
You're embarrassing humanity in front of the dinosaurs!”
There's
good stuff in this book, the battles and action are very well done
and given to us from different view points so we get to watch from
afar and be right in the front lines. There's also a good variety of
action from one on one fights on dinosaur back and on foot to mass
battles and everything in between. However I never got the same
sense with the intrigue or the plotting. I'm left very fuzzy on what
the different factions in the imperial court are and what they want.
Additionally... This entire book feels like a prologue not a complete
story and I HATE that. This is especially true of the whole Melodia
story line which could have frankly been saved as chapters in the
next book and acted as the beginning to her story line. Jaume's
story doesn't come to a conclusion so much as kinda meander to a
stop. While Karyl's story line which is the closest thing to a full
story ends on a semi-cliff hanger. Look, there's nothing wrong with
writing an interconnected series of books telling a single grand
story but each book that I paid cash money for should give me a
complete story in and of itself. I mean Larry Correia can do it,
Kevin Herne does it masterfully in the Iron Druid series, I expect a
veteran writer like Milan to do the same. It's not that The Dinosaur
Lords is a bad story mind you, it's that it's not a complete story.
Still I did like most of the characters and really enjoyed the
battles and the world itself is very interesting so it's not like I
felt I wasted my money. Still I can't in good faith give The
Dinosaur Lords by Victor Milian more than a C+. Lack of a satisfying ending in any of
the story lines and issues with the characters and the politics is
holding down what should be something awesome. Hopefully the sequel
can address some of these issues.
Next
time: I am going to Phoenix Comic Con! But you're still getting a
review! Let's see what I think of Gail Simone writing of the Red
Devil of Hyrkania. See you next week!
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