Son of the Black Sword
by Larry Correia
Okay,
let me grasp the bull by the horns. I've discussed my stance on some
things Mr. Correia is/was involved with. I'm not doing it again, and
my opinion has not changed. If you're interested go take a look at
the first and so far only sidebar I've posted. While I have
differences of opinion with Mr. Correia politically, there are also
things I agree with him over. That said I don't think such things
are relevant in a discussion about his books. So on to the book!
This
is the second book of Mr. Correia's I'll have reviewed here, unlike
the last one, this book is the first in a series! So unlike Monster
Hunter Nemesis a reader doesn't need knowledge from half a dozen
prior books to really appreciate what's going on. It's not that I'm
against long series mind you, but I do feel that the industry seems
hell bent on turning every story into a 7 to 12 book series... Which
is unnecessary. Some stories do need that kind of space to tell
their tales, but a number of series really went longer then they
should of (Wheel of Time is the poster boy of this to me. That's
right! I said it!). But I digress.
Unlike
the other two series of Mr. Correia's that I've read. Son of the
Black Sword is a more or less straight fantasy. Being a fantasy
taking place on another world, we of course have... Backstory! In
this case long ago, the Gods went to War and cast Demons out of
heaven. Unfortunately the aim of the Gods leaves a lot to be desired
as those Demons landed on the world of men. Unprepared and unwarned
the Demons were able to cause widespread destruction and chaos, and
basically brought about the downfall of civilization, as demons tend
to do. The gods realizing that this little oops was on them sent a
great hero to save mankind, his name was Ramrowan and he united
mankind, taught them magic and created the weapons they needed to
kill demons. Under his divine leadership they fought back and drove
the demons literally into the sea. The Demons however were not
destroyed, instead they remain in the sea, lurking, waiting and at
times attacking the land seeking weakness. So they may once again
throw down the works of mankind and bring ruin. To ensure that this
would never happen, the sons and daughters of Ramrowan were made into
kings and priests. The 1% if you will. Over the generations, they
grew degenerate, venial and cruel. Until unable to bear their unjust
rule anymore, the people rose up, killing many of the Kings and
Priests and forcing their relatives into a subservience. Mankind then
established The Law, creating a stable society that had a place for
everyone and put everyone in their place and ensured that a watch
would be kept on the sea... Or did they?
The
society that rules the continent of Lok, which due to the ocean being
a demon infested death trap is completely cut off from the outside
world, is an harsh, demanding one. A complex Caste system sprawls
over the land, locking men and women into social roles dictated by
birth. The Castes themselves have internal ranks and hierarchies as
well. A man (or woman) can move up the ranks of their Caste, but
they can never hope to move beyond that. Political administration
and power is handled by Great Houses ruled by noble families served
by military families, fed by farming families, with goods and
services provided by merchant families. Meanwhile the dirty, painful
disgusting jobs are handled by the untouchables. A group of people
who are literally lower then slaves, slaves usually being war
captives or debtors, who unlike the untouchables can be freed. The
system itself is maintained by a number of organizations who exist
outside the control of the Great Houses. The Judges, who hear and
decide the law. The Inquisitors who seek for those who would subvert
or corrupt the law. The Protectors, who fight and kill those who
would openly defy the law and also fight and kill outside threats to
society (like Demons). Protectors are able to do this because they
are magic super soldiers! Just think of them as an order of
psychotic Captain America's who live like warrior monks and have no
problems tearing people apart with their bare hands. The deal with
the Protectors is pretty simple, very young men are sent to train by
their Great Houses. They are made into the best two legged killing
machines possible and given strength, speed and stamina beyond the
limits of normal men. They are unleashed against the enemies of
Order and Law. If they survive 20 years of this, they can be
promoted into high office within the Order of Protectors... Or they
can go home. Most never face that choice.
Our
main character and his best buddy are actually Protectors. Ashok
Vadal, who is the son of the black sword in the title (I'll get to
the magic sword in a minute) and his bestest best friend (to be
honest from what I can tell his only friend) Devedas. Ashok Vadal
has survived 20 years in the service by being the most dangerous man
on the continent. He's aided in achieving this status by his magic
sword, Angruvadal the Black Sword of the title. Angruvadal gifts
Ashok with the battle memories and reflexes of all it's past
wielders, meaning that he always knows what the right counter move or
the best tactic in a fight is. Add this to his Protector given speed
and strength and fighting him is really a messy method of suicide.
Angruvadal isn't unique, as there are a number of black swords out
there and they all grant their users such abilities. However each
sword chooses it's wielder and if someone who the sword doesn't
approve of tries to pick up the sword... Well, honestly folks it
might be better to go tug the tail of a cobra or something. What
really makes Ashok special though, is his utter and complete devotion
to the Law. Serving the Law is everything to him, fulfilling his
proper duty and station are what give his life meaning. He literally
cannot conceive of another life and even if he could, he wouldn't
want to. He is what everyone thinks they want a perfect law enforcer
to be (trust me. Y'all don't really want that though). Which may be
why he reacts so violently when he finds out everything he thought
he was and everything about his past... Is a damn lie. Ashok's
refusal to go with the lie and his refusal to let anyone keep it
buried or well, to let the people who profited it... Live... Adds
fuel to the fire of a crisis already shaking the foundations of his
society (the untouchables have had enough of your shit sir and they
got a prophet to lead them this time). In a lot of ways Ashok's
character is comparable to Master Sergeant Sage, from Mel Odom's
Master Sergeant. Only instead of me being bored out of my mind
because Sage isn't real person, Correia goes with the fact that real
people aren't like this and asks “What would it take to make a
person like that?” What answer did he come up with you ask? An
atrocity so vile that despite the fact that I'm not sure that I like
Ashok...
I was
cheering him on when he hacked an old lady to death for what she did
to him to make him the perfect wielder of the Black Sword. It's a
revelation I found disturbing because, frankly I think if it could be
done there are people who would support doing it to police and
soldiers and in doing so would take away large parts of our humanity
and autonomy. Not to get political on you folks, but my experience
has been that there are people on the left and on the right who would
gleefully scrape away the free will and independence of every Marine,
Soldier, Police Officer, Sailor and so on in order to achieve their
goals. Some of those goals are even noble but speaking as a man with
4 years in the Marine, I find the sheer gleeful disregard of my own
personal right to rule my own mind unnerving as it seems some folk
are perfectly okay with viewing us as less then human because we
decided to wear a uniform. But enough of that. Let me talk about
Devedas.
Devedas
is the son of a Black Sword wielder, he grew up being trained to take
his father's place so when the sword shattered (when the wielder does
something that the sword finds disgraceful, it breaks and usually the
wielder dies soon after if not on the spot) his family is disgraced
and cast out of power and he joins the Protectors because... Well he
doesn't have any other options. He's loyal, cunning, smart, brave
and ambitious. In another book, he would be our main character! He's
also deeply jealous of Ashok because... He has everything Devedas
wants. He has done his level best to master his jealous of his
friend when the truth comes out... It's the final straw. Devedas
washes his hands of Ashok and goes to become leader of the
Protectors. Which in an interesting twist means that he's the one
who is confronts and for most of the book is doing the most to oppose
the villain of the story. The villain being Grand Inquisitor Omand.
As we
all know, being an Inquisitor is a bad sign in fantasy fiction.
Omand lives up to this being a vile, double faced, monster of a human
being that someone should have drowned in a pond before he reached
adulthood. I hate Omand's guts all the more because... I agree with
his premise. Our Grand Inquisitor argues that the Great Houses have
to much power. To many lives and resources are wasted in their petty
conflicts and border wars. Additionally despite the best efforts of
the Judges, Inquisitors and Protectors, the Great Houses often twist
or bend the Law to their own advantage with the leading families
being more concerned with their privileges then their duties. He's
not wrong, but his solution is to create a centralized state (ruled
by him of course) via methods that place him firmly alongside people
like Pol Pot! His solution is worse then the problem! It's akin to
fixing broken legs by cutting off everything below the waist! The
cherry of what in the hell is wrong with you on this you are a
terrible person sundae is the fact that... I think Omand knows this
and just does not care because this method ensures that he'll be in
charge when the dust settles. Which makes him even worse!
Ashok,
Devedas and Omand form 3 factions moving through larger events that
the other characters find themselves falling into. My two favorites
being Thera and Rada, both of them are women, but that's all they
really have in common. Thera is an outlaw and criminal because she
can't keep to her place. Because of that she is officially done with
your shit. She's blunt, outspoken, clever, sneaky and always pushing
at Ashok and letting him know firmly what an idiot he is. Which I
approve of. She's also rather talented with knives which while a
traditional choice for women characters, makes perfect sense. She's
a criminal who legally isn't suppose to own any weapons, any weapons
she does own is going to have to be easy to hide, easy to obtain and
be cheap enough that you can afford to lose it. Knives fit that
rather well. Rada on the other hand is an upper class woman, her
father is the chief of the libertarians, who function as the record
keepers, researchers and general scholars for the central government.
All Rada wants to be left alone to do a good job with her books and
provide complete untampered with information to the Judges who ask
for it. She doesn't have any problems jumping into bed with Devedas
mind you and isn't militantly anti-social, it's just she would be
perfectly happy if all these political manics just left her and her
books alone damn it! But when they do drag her kicking and screaming
out of her book stacks, she is going to do her level best to do the
right thing. I like Rada honestly and I can completely sympathize
with where she's coming from. Devedas also doesn't have a problem
jumping into bed with Rada, which shows he has good taste in woman at
least.
Unfortunately,
I spend a lot less time then I would like with characters like Rada
and Thera and more with Ashok, who I'm not sure I like. I'm
sympathetic to his inner turmoil but his stubborn death grip on what
he knows to be merely be someone else rearranging his life grates on
me. Maybe he has no choice in the matter but it gets damn annoying
and I find myself wishing Thera would hit him over the head with a
rock and hopeful knock the stupid out. At this point I'm going to
have throw my hands up and declare that protagonists that grate on
people are Mr. Correia's specialty. Ashok is also damn passive
throughout a lot of the book, leaving a lot of work to Rada and
Devedas. The Caste System is pervasive through the book,
but honestly we're left with no voices to really make an argument for
it. The book takes the position that Caste systems are bad, which I
agree with but... Seriously have someone make a good argument for it
if it's going to be something everyone agrees with. Additionally the
book ends on a bloody cliff hanger which frustrated me greatly. It's
not a huge cliff so to speak but still... Tell a complete story in a
single book guys! That doesn't mean you can't have plot threads that
continue through more then one book but each book should be a story
in it's own right! Still, despite this Son of the Black Sword by
Larry Correia lands at a B-, hopefully the sequel won't have a
cliffhanger.
Announcement!
I am going on a holiday break as I am leaving my home in Phoenix for
awhile to visit my parents in Oklahoma. As such the reviews are on
January 15th with Heroes Die. What else can you expect to
see? Empire of the Summer Moon, Lirael, the Dinosaur Lords,
Seedbearing Prince II and more! Thank you for reading! I Will
Return!